Listen Closely
Surrounded by darknessreverberations are my musebarely feeling the angels ensconced in beautyI dare not breathe.Intoxication of my sensespurity of the needopium silencing upon the edge of reasonleave...
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In this, i found lovely and stirring images. It's quiet.i found one typo- 'humanities' should be humanity's, i believe. Also, i think with better punctuation, this would read smoother, the idea would...
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The first thing that went through my mind when I saw the title was the melody to the Beatles song that started out with:"Listen, do you wanna know a secret?"However, the opening verse:Surrounded by...
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I especially liked the last verse:These simple chordsgentle tranquilI lay my headon your baroque vestand rest.
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I have to agree with Paura. I did like the mood here and word choices. xo
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Hey, Doug, good to see ya, as soon as I saw your title I thought of the Beatles (dead and alive) I thought 'opium silencing' a very soothing line indeed, and like Pete, I also adored that close, good...
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christine I changed the typo. My ode to music, the transcendental feeling I get from a lovely song. Thanks for your comments and suggestions!
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paura I find darkness heightens my listening pleasure, when all it is, is me and the music. This is my ode to music and being immersed in its joy, vitality and roar of emotion!!! Thanks for your...
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Pete thanks for your kind words!!!Cherilyn thanks I appreciate that!!!!!!!!!!!!
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BG hey the Beatles rule, I'm pleased I'm reminding people of them. The opium line seems to be a hit, lol!Thanks for your very kind remarks!!!!!!!!!
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