Listen Closely

April 10, 2006, 3:45 pm

Surrounded by darknessreverberations are my musebarely feeling the angels ensconced in beautyI dare not breathe.Intoxication of my sensespurity of the needopium silencing upon the edge of reasonleave...

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Re: Listen Closely

April 10, 2006, 6:01 pm

In this, i found lovely and stirring images. It's quiet.i found one typo- 'humanities' should be humanity's, i believe. Also, i think with better punctuation, this would read smoother, the idea would...

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Re: Listen Closely

April 10, 2006, 6:36 pm

The first thing that went through my mind when I saw the title was the melody to the Beatles song that started out with:"Listen, do you wanna know a secret?"However, the opening verse:Surrounded by...

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Re: Listen Closely

April 10, 2006, 6:37 pm

I especially liked the last verse:These simple chordsgentle tranquilI lay my headon your baroque vestand rest.

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Re: Listen Closely

April 10, 2006, 7:25 pm

I have to agree with Paura. I did like the mood here and word choices. xo

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Re: Listen Closely

April 10, 2006, 11:56 pm

Hey, Doug, good to see ya, as soon as I saw your title I thought of the Beatles (dead and alive) I thought 'opium silencing' a very soothing line indeed, and like Pete, I also adored that close, good...

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Re: Listen Closely

April 14, 2006, 8:09 pm

christine I changed the typo. My ode to music, the transcendental feeling I get from a lovely song. Thanks for your comments and suggestions!

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Re: Listen Closely

April 14, 2006, 8:13 pm

paura I find darkness heightens my listening pleasure, when all it is, is me and the music. This is my ode to music and being immersed in its joy, vitality and roar of emotion!!! Thanks for your...

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